So there was this time when I was reading a lot of Vikram Seth - more poetry than prose - and got so influenced by his crisp thought-flow, that I would try and pen down verses in his style. Here's one such example. Have written a few more, will share by and by.
For love, a few hugs
and a little kiss,
I let him
Like me.
Heart rose to the occasion, indeed,
And so I liked him,
For love, a few hugs
I never read poems.. but this looks interesting. Should try Vikram Seth's works sometime :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading this one Vivek! Do browse through Seth. He writes great nature and love poems.
DeleteVery cute.
ReplyDeleteYou should write more.
Thanks for the motivating words Indrani! :)
Deletei like it how the protagonist is in control..... i let him like me....cool!
ReplyDeleteNot in control actually! It's sort of surrender.
DeleteLovely :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletesuperb :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bharati! :)
Deletenice one....!
ReplyDeleteThanksAmrita! :)
DeleteFor love, a few hugs and a little kiss.. Liked it so much. I have tagged you here for a contest on BlogAdda. All you need to do is to accept the tag and write your own story on how much you hate your unclean stubble :) Please let me know once you accept the tag!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thanks for appreciating the poem Saravana!
DeleteNot participating in the PASS activity! Don't quite believe in the concept. Hope you don't mind.
Beautiful it is :)
ReplyDeleteYou should write and share poems quite often :)
Loved it!
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Thank you so much for the kind words and the appreciation Priyanka. :)
DeleteBeautiful Ragini .. Its lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna! Glad you liked it! :)
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