Tuesday, 12 November 2013

Let the Love Last

Love embraces me today -
eternal, strong and pure, 
spring in my steps can vouch

I have never been so sure.

Sticks of Bougainvillea, 
hanging big and bright
Jasmines in full bloom, 
This never felt so right.

My man standing thrilled here
has given me this ring,
the proposal of lifelong love,
has made me dance and sing!

The platinum in my finger
enduring is its cast,
We will not last forever, love
Let’s let the love last.
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17 comments:

  1. Neeraj Kumar13 November 2013 at 10:03

    Wonderful lines and of course the best line is : Let's let the love last

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  2. Hey Wait, Listen!13 November 2013 at 10:23

    Beautiful lines, mam! :)
    Best of luck for the contest! :)
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    1. Ragini Puri28 December 2013 at 01:25

      Thanks for stopping by Bhumi!
      And just Ragini would do! :)

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  3. Anita Sabat13 November 2013 at 10:52

    Love will last forever after we are gone! True Ragini! :)

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  4. Anonymous13 November 2013 at 20:27

    nice poem. Let’s let the love last for forever :)

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    1. Ragini Puri28 December 2013 at 01:35

      Thanks for stopping by Amar! Welcome here! :)

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  5. Jyotsna Bhatia13 November 2013 at 23:59

    Another beautiful one :)

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  6. Jyotsna Bhatia14 November 2013 at 00:00

    And yes, loved - "Let’s let the love last."

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  7. Afshan Shaik14 November 2013 at 10:24

    The last two lines just made the perfect ending !
    Bful poem
    All the best

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  8. Preethi Venugopala20 November 2013 at 18:15

    Nice..Loved your Blog.

    Accept the Liebster from my Blog.

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    1. Ragini Puri28 December 2013 at 01:41

      Thanks for stopping by Preethi! Warm welcome! :)

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  9. Ragini Puri28 December 2013 at 01:27

    Thanks Aditi! :)

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